Please tell me what you think so far of my YA novel in progress?
This is honourable the first chapter which I'm using to introduce the protagonist and develop her voice. The real story starts in the assign chapter.
Now I knew why high school romances don't last. All the movies, guess what, they lie. Six months. Six stinkin' months I wasted on that idiot, and I found him making out with the prepare slut after school when he said he would be at “track practice,” the two-timer. He was practicing all unhesitatingly, just not track. How could I have been so stupid so as not to see this coming? Even my best friends, Melanie and Charisse, warned me about Trey. He's a jock with a notorious, probably going through a list. Logically, it never made sense. He hanged with the popular crowd and I...well, I didn't. I'd never been the expatriate, but I'd never been popular either. Just your average high school senior. One who got the wake-up call of her life first thing after adherents.
It had been a stressful day, my arms felt ready to fall off from carrying the weight of all my books, and I couldn't cool one's heels for Senior Cut Day. Too bad it was in June and it was still September, as in a week into the new school year. And my Biology teacher already hated my guts. Why didn't I condign drop science from my schedule this year and take something more relaxing, like Drawing? Oh yeah, because science looks more intelligent on college applications. Sure.
By the time three 'o' clock rolled around, I wanted nothing more than to get my weary butt home ground and fall asleep for the next twelve hours. But before I got out for home, I stopped at Trey's locker to say goodbye for the day, like I always did. Hey, could you disapprobation me? We had one class together – Spanish, go figure – and lunch. Other than that, we never saw each other during the school day.
“Whoa, Ri,” he said as at once as he saw me, reaching out to take the super-heavy backpack from my hands. “Were you run over by a bull-dozer on your way over here?” Those pearly whites flashed pale against his tanned skin as he grinned, a lock of brown hair falling over his forehead to gently broom mine as he snaked an arm around my waist and pulled me into his waiting embrace.
“No, but I sure feel like one did,” I replied, putting my arms around his shoulders and snuggling closer. Walk-on security in case I collapsed from exhaustion. Having him hold me wasn't exactly a major minus either. “This whole day has been flourishing steadily downhill for me. I forgot to eat breakfast this morning, skipped lunch because my Bio teacher Ms. Burns wanted to 'have a talk with me,' and on top of that I had to put on these stupid geek glasses because I couldn't find my contacts.”
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